5/10
The art used for the first chapter is nice, it gives me vibes of Shining Sword. Sadly, it goes down in quality quickly, being just some average/low-tier work.
The plot is fine, the character design too. (for once it’s not a regression or reincarnation or deus ex machina trope that makes the MC op)
But the last negative thing is the translation… or the trashlation to be more specific. AI works here, and not for the best, naming that changes from one chap to the next, “I” being “he”, “he” being “you”, “sister” being “brother”, “too far” being “too strong” and it goes on … Maybe read the asura version, if it’s better.
(even with a decent translation, it’s barely a 6.5/10)

Can help if you have insomnia, otherwise … meh.